Saturday, March 20, 2010

Dear Aunt Betty, it has come to my attention that you are trying to eat healthy while on a budget. Uncle bill has informed me that you have tried many different ways but none of them have worked. although you are the older and the wiser i would hope that some advice from your second oldest neice would help you make a better choice. If you choose not to listen or take my advice then i will understand. this is a very touchy subject not only for you but for many other families that are in the same predicament as yourself. Here is what you can do to eat healthier on a budget. First, off try looking at the ads in those supermarket packages that are left on your doorsteps each week. They have some very good items that you just might be interested in. Then buy some vegetable seeds that you like the most and some potting soil. With these items you can start your own garden in your backyard. By doing so you will save yourself money on the everyday used vegetables like green beans, tomatoes, corn, and many other vegetables as well. Vegetables like these can be frozen for long periods of time. Take the tomatoes for instance, you can make homemade sauces and ketchup from scratch that will save you money for a while. these sauces can store for up to two years and won't even spoil. The green beans you can clean and freeze up to a year. You can also do this with squash, onions, corn, spinach, and many others. Did you also know that you can make your own pasta and freeze it for six months to a year? Yes you can do that too. You can even make your own bread and freeze it up to six months at a time. Now how very interested are you or should I say inclined to make a change for the better.
In conclusion, as we said before there are many ways to eat healthier on a budget, also how to save big money. These are just a few ways to make a bad situation in today's economy go better for everyone involved.

2 comments:

  1. •Please capitalize your first word in your sentence.
    •Your essay is really short.

    •(By doing so you will save yourself money on the everyday used vegetables like green beans, tomatoes, corn, and many other vegetables as well) you have some grammar issue here. I think you should check your grammar.

    •I think you should explain more about how to make pasta at home.

    •You do not have five paragraphs in your essay. You do not separate your ideas.

    •You should explain more.

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  2. The essay is somewhat insightful but can be explained more in depth.

    It does not follow the 5 paragraph and I am having trouble finding your thesis statement.

    It is a nicely done essay despite the few grammars that can be easily fixed. Also organizing your ideas is crucial (an example would be my essay, if I would of taken more time to revise my key points it would be better to read).

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